优化语句结构

原文：

因此根据信道的变化选择合适的调制编码方式，这对最大程度的利用通信资源非常重要，否则会造成通信资源的浪费。

初始译文：

Therefore, to select an appropriate modulation coding scheme in accordance with channel changes is of great importance in making the best use of communication resources, otherwise a waste of communication resources will be caused.

修订译文：

Therefore, selecting an appropriate modulation coding scheme according to changes in the channel condition is of great importance to the maximum utilization of communication resources. Failing to do so will otherwise cause a waste of the communication resources.

具体改动：

Therefore, to select selecting an appropriate modulation coding scheme according to changes in accordance with the channel changes condition is of great importance in making to the best use maximum utilization of communication resources, . Failing to do so will otherwise cause a waste of the communication resources will be caused resources.

原文：

由于目前常用的自适应调制编码方法调整调制编码方式只采用信噪比信息，这种方法具有滞后性，在突发干扰很多的ISM 非授权频段，特别在一些保证超低延时、出错重传次数限制的通信系统中，传统的AMC 方法反应不够迅速，会很容易造成吞吐率下降并产生数据错误。

初始译文：

Since currently common adaptive modulation coding methods only use signal-to-noise ratio information for adjusting a modulation coding scheme, such methods are prone to a lag. In ISM unlicensed frequency bands with undue burst interference, especially in some communication systems which guarantee ultra low delay and have a limit on occurrences of error retransmission, traditional AMC methods fail to make a quick response and are highly likely to decrease the throughput and produce data errors.

修订译文：

In commonly used adaptive modulation coding (AMC) methods, a modulation coding scheme can only be adjusted using SINR information. Such methods are accompanied with a lag. In ISM unlicensed frequency bands with much burst interference, and especially for certain communication systems with guaranteed ultra-low delay and limitation on the number of error retransmissions, conventional AMC methods fail to make a sufficiently quick response and are very likely to decrease the throughput and produce data errors.

具体改动：

Since currently common In commonly used adaptive modulation coding (AMC) methods, a modulation coding scheme can only be adjusted only use using SINR information for adjusting a modulation coding scheme. sSuch methods are proneto accompanied with a lag. In ISM unlicensed frequency bands with much undue burst interference, and especially in for some certain communication systems witch with guaranteed ultra low ultra-low delay and have a limit limitation on occurrences the number of error retransmissions , traditional conventional AMC methods fail to make a sufficiently quick response and are highly very likely to decrease the throughput and produce data errors.

精修表达要点

原文：

综上可知，本发明实施例提供的无线通信控制装置根据信噪比的历史测量结果估计出当前信道的信噪比，以及获取当前业务的传输错误比率，结合当前信道的信噪比及传输错误比率确定无线通信控制方式，由于将当前业务的传输错误比率和当前信道的信噪比相结合来共同确定无线通信控制方式，当前业务的传输错误比率可直观反映出数据的传输情况，使得对无线通信控制更加精确，灵敏度很高，能够适用于突发干扰很多的ISM 非授权频段。

初始译文：

To sum up, the device for wireless communication control provided by an embodiment of the disclosure can estimate a signal-to-noise ratio of a current channel according to historical measurement results of signal-to-noise ratios, acquire a transmission error rate of a current service, and determine a wireless communication control scheme with reference to the signal-to-noise ratio of the current channel and the transmission error rate. Since the wireless communication control scheme is determined by combining the transmission error rate of the current service and the signal-to-noise ratio of the current channel, and the transmission error rate of the current service can intuitively reflect the data transmission situation, wireless communication control can be made more precise, highly sensitive and applicable to ISM unlicensed frequency-bands where there exists a lot of burst interference.

修订译文：

In summary, with the wireless communication control device provided by the embodiment of the disclosure, a SINR of a current channel can be estimated based upon historical measurement results of SINRs, a transmission error rate of a current traffic can be obtained, and a wireless communication control scheme can be determined in connection with the SINR of the current channel and the transmission error rate. Since the wireless communication control scheme can be determined based upon a combination of the transmission error rate of the current traffic and the SINR of the current channel, the wireless communication control can be made more precise with a high sensitivity to be applicable to ISM unlicensed frequency bands with much burst interference as the transmission error rate of the current traffic can directly reflect the data transmission performance.

具体改动：

In summary, with the wireless communication control device provided by an the embodiment of the disclosure, a SINR of a current channel can be estimated based upon historical measurement results of SINRs, a transmission error rate of a current traffic can be obtained, and a wireless communication control scheme can be determined in connection with the SINR of the current channel and the transmission error rate. Since the wireless communication control scheme can be determined based upon a combination of the transmission error rate of the current traffic and the SINR of the current channel, the wireless communication control can be made more precise with a high sensitivity to be applicable to ISM unlicensed frequency bands with much burst interference, as the transmission error rate of the current traffic can directly reflect the data transmission performance. can estimate a signal-to-noise ratio of a current channel according to historical measurement results of signal-to-noise ratios, acquire a transmission error rate of a current service, and determine a wireless communication control scheme with reference to the signal-to-noise ratio of the current channel and the transmission error rate. Since the wireless communication control scheme is determined by combining the transmission error rate of the current service and the signal-to-noise ratio of the current channel, and the transmission error rate of the current service can intuitively reflect the data transmission situation, wireless communication control can be made more precise, highly sensitive and applicable to ISM unlicensed frequency-bands where there exists a lot of burst interference.

原文：

此外，由于冗余系统接口有限，这种分立式系统限制了系统的功能扩展，不能适应应用场合复杂、功能需求多变的要求。

初始译文：

Additionally, because the redundant system interface is limited, functional expansion of the system will be limited by such a discrete system, and it cannot meet the requirements of complex application scenes and variable functional demands.

修订译文：

Moreover, limited redundancy in system interfaces of such discrete system can put restrictions on functional extensibility of the system, making it difficult to meet the demand on functional flexibility for complex application scenarios.

具体改动：

Additionally Moreover, because limited redundancy in the redundant system interfaces of such discrete system is limited, can put restrictions on functional extensibility expansion of the system, will be limited by such a discrete system, and making it cannot difficult to meet the demands functional flexibility for complex application scenarios. on functional flexibility for complex application scenarios on variable functions and complex application scenarios.

正确运用术语

原文：

“稠合杂环烷基”包含稠合到苯基、环烷基、杂环烷基或杂芳基的单环杂环烷基环，且包括但不限于：2,3-二氢苯并呋喃基、1,3-二氢异苯并呋喃基、二氢吲哚基、2,3-二氢苯并[b]噻吩基、二氢苯并哌喃基、1,2,3,4-四氢喹啉基等。

初始译文：

The "condensed heterocycloalkyl" comprises a monocyclic heterocycloalkyl ring condensed to a phenyl, a cycloalkyl, a heterocycloalkyl or a heteroaryl, including but not limited to 2,3-dihydrobenzofuranyl, 1,3-dihydroisobenzofuranyl, indanyl, 2,3-dihydrobenzo[b]thienyl, dihydrobenzopyranyl, 1,2,3,4-tetrahydroquinolyl, etc.

修订译文：

The "fused heterocycloalkyl" comprises a monocyclic heterocycloalkyl ring fused to a phenyl, a cycloalkyl, a heterocycloalkyl or a heteroaryl, including but not limited to 2,3-dihydrobenzofuranyl, 1,3-dihydroisobenzofuranyl, indolinyl, 2,3-dihydrobenzo[b]thienyl, dihydrobenzopyranyl, 1,2,3,4-tetrahydroquinolyl, etc.

具体改动：

The "condensed fused heterocycloalkyl" comprises a monocyclic heterocycloalkyl ring condensed fused to a phenyl, a cycloalkyl, a heterocycloalkyl or a heteroaryl, including but not limited to 2,3-dihydrobenzofuranyl, 1,3-dihydroisobenzofuranyl, indanyl indolinyl, 2,3-dihydrobenzo[b]thienyl, dihydrobenzopyranyl, 1,2,3,4-tetrahydroquinolyl, etc.

原文：

选取与正常关节软骨细胞外基质主要成分相同的材料作为原料，制备用于软骨再生修复的注射型软骨仿生基质材料。

初始译文：

A material having the same main components as the extracellular matrix of normal articular cartilage is selected as the raw material to prepare a injection-type cartilage simulative matrix material for the regenerative repair of cartilage.

修订译文：

A material having the same main components as the extracellular matrix of normal articular cartilage is selected as the raw material to prepare a injection-type cartilage biomimetic matrix material for the regenerative repair of cartilage.

具体改动：

A material having the same main components as the extracellular matrix of normal articular cartilage is selected as the raw material to prepare a an injection-type cartilage simulative biomimetic matrix material for the regenerative repair of cartilage.

排除语法缺陷

原文：

TiO₂是一种常用的光催化剂，具有活性高、稳定性好，不产生二次污染，对人体无害，价格便宜等诸多优点。

初始译文：

TiO₂ is a commonly used photocatalyst, which has many advantages of a high activity, a good stability, no produce secondary pollution, harmless to the human body and a low price.

修订译文：

TiO₂ is a commonly used photocatalyst with many advantages such as high activity, good stability, no secondary pollution, harmless to the human body, and low price.

具体改动：

TiO₂ is a commonly used photocatalyst with which hash many advantages such as of a high activity, a good stability, no produce secondary pollution, harmless to the human body, and a low price.

原文：

具体地说，是将钛氧聚合物在空气下400-600℃烧结得到多孔纳米TiO₂光催化剂。

初始译文：

More in particularly the titanium-oxide polymer was sintered under air at 400-600°C to obtain the porous nano-TiO₂ photocatalyst.

修订译文：

Specifically, the titanium-oxide polymer is sintered at 400-600°C in air to obtain the porous nano-TiO₂ photocatalyst.

具体改动：

More in particularly Specifically, the titanium-oxide polymer was is sintered under air at 400-600°C in air to obtain the porous nano-TiO₂ photocatalyst.